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2022.9.3真题

Some college freshmen find that the course they choose are not suitable for them. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve the problem?


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题目解析

在看范文之前,同学们需要注意几点:


1. 本题为报告类题目(causes and solutions型),需要原因和解决各写2个一共4个点。


2. 报告类型题目结论不要出现个人倾向(e.g. I agree xxx),开头段写陈述句,结尾段写总结句即可(但是要大于一句话)。


3. 该题为教育类型题目,词汇及其容易落入俗套,所以黄老师强烈推荐同学们背诵下列范文高分词:


initiative n. 主观能动性

in-demand skills n. 刚需技能

peer n. 同伴

opt for v. 选择

merely adv. 仅仅地

Impose v. 强加

align v. 同步协调(适合的替换词)

indecision n. 优柔寡断(犹豫不决)

reliability n. 可靠度

authenticity  n. 真实度

misinformed adj. 错误(基于错误信息)的

overwhelm v. 被…感到不知所措


这些词汇均为黄老师从英文期刊杂志中摘抄而得,为母语者使用的地道词汇,同学们一定要仔细背诵,争取考试时可以用到。


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满分词汇&高分段落

2022.9.3真题


Some college freshmen find that the course they choose are not suitable for them. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve the problem?


满分词汇:


initiative n. 主观能动性

in-demand skills n. 刚需技能

peer n. 同伴

opt for v. 选择

merely adv. 仅仅地

Impose v. 强加

align v. 同步协调(适合的替换词)

indecision n. 优柔寡断(犹豫不决)

reliability n. 可靠度

authenticity  n. 真实度

misinformed adj. 错误(基于错误信息)的

overwhelm v. 被…感到不知所措



原因1:

Some students with no initiative tend to do no research on which courses deliver the most in-demand skills in the current and future job market, ending up joining courses their peers opt for, and only regretting it when it is too late. 

原因2:

Others enroll in a course merely to please their parents, who impose their own will of pursuing a conventional career path on their offsprings. Fearing of disappointing them, some young people will continue a course which is not aligned with their interest nor talent.

原因3:

Colleges, on the other hand, provide students with too many course choices, leading to indecision and failure in course choosing.


解决1:

High school graduates should conduct extensive research about programs, subjects, and the duration for their preferred courses, including the long-term benefits and employment opportunities that can be acquired by studying a particular field. When searching the relevant information, it is essential to ensure the reliability and authenticity of the source to avoid making misinformed decision.


解决2:

Furthermore, choosing a college major also entails an evaluation of one’s own skills and abilities. It is of great importance to enroll in a course or major that allows one to explore both interests and abilities. Also, college administrators should effectively direct students through their initial stages, especially for those who are overwhelmed by course options.




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