【限免】雅思翻译宣讲会

【限免】Seminar 时间：2014年7月5日（本周六）下午1PM~3PM

【限免】Seminar 地点：Level6, 388 Bourke St, Melbourne,3000

【限免】Seminar 内容：

– 2014年下半年雅思写作考什么？

– 雅思口语如何有效提高？

– 揭秘雅思口语考官如何打分

– NAATI三级笔译 和 二级口译如何选择？

– 揭秘二级口译的重点难点

– 解析NAATI考试评分标准

活动完全免费，参与讲座的同学均有机会获得雅思考试专用下蛋笔一支！~

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雅思写作高分结构介绍

拥有一个清晰的雅思写作结构是取得雅思写作高分的重要保证。

雅思写作结构的中心是让大家更加容易的阅读，但是并不是说要用很多的简单句。很多考生在雅思写作中使用过多简单句，成了简单句堆砌;有的写复杂句时，动辄用so， and，then，but，or，however，yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使句子结构松散、呆板。

巧用连接词就可以避免这种情况的发生，尤其是一些表示从属关系的连接词，如 who，which，that，because，since，although，after，as，before，when，whenever，if，unless，as if等，不仅能够丰富句型，而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚，意义更连贯，组成更加清晰的雅思写作高分结构。

下面我们通过两个学生写的作文来举例说明：

例1：Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it becomes a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact.

分析：这段文字用简单句表达，它们之间内在的逻辑关系含糊不清，意思支离破碎。如果使用连接词，将单句与其前后合并，形成主次关系，就把一个比较复杂的内容和关系表达得层次清楚、结构严谨。

改为：It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true.

例2：The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world，and in spring time it often overflows its banks，and the lives of many people are endangered.

分析：此句用and把三个分句一贯到底，既乏味又可笑。如果使用了关系代词which，语义就会更连贯，语言也会更流畅：

改为：The Mississippi River，which is one of the longest rivers in the world，often overflows its banks in the spring time，endangering the lives of many people.

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