【Nicole+Jeremy原创】雅思8月20日G类书信类写作满分范文,曼拓教育微信公众号文章

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题目

You find some mistakes in a travel book. Write a letter to the publisher/writer and in your letter you should include:

Why/How you know the place

what are the mistakes

why it is important to correct the mistakes

正文

Dear Sir or Madam,

This is Nicole, the manager at St James Contemporary Art Gallery. I am writing this letter to express my concern about two mistakes in your best selling book ‘Adventures in London’.

Being highly accredited by both domestic and international readers, this book offers sufficient details of most famous tourist attractions in London such as the opening hours, ticket price, as well as any other up-to-date subtle changes. However, after reading this book, I found some incorrect information.

Firstly, the sculpture and oil painting exhibitions are currently held in London National Museum instead of ours. Additionally, the Gallery, which previously opened from 9AM to 5PM on every Wednesday, now only opens from 9AM to 12PM.

Recent complaints have shown that the imprecise information has already brought recent visitors some inconvenience so that they either rescheduled their visits or even missed the chances to visit to the gallery. Therefore, I suggest that you correct those mistakes in your next prints.

I am looking forward to your response at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,

Nicole Zhang

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