高频Essay《工作和生活的权衡》解析之词汇积累+范文

原创 2018年10月19日 7PLUS英语


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相信大家已经看了上一篇的文章<<高频Essay工作和生活的权衡解析之结构分析>> 对于这三种版本的工作和生活权衡的题目有了结构上的了解。那么既然清楚要写的作文内容,那么第二步就是准备论点。准备论点则离不开词汇上面的积累,那么我们就来看看有哪些短语单词和论点可以使用在这类作文题目中吧!

 

还是分成三个版本的类别来给大家参考:(不清楚为什么这么分类的同学请看回前一篇工作和生活的权衡解析1)

 

第一种版本

普及

1.      a  common phenomenon (一个普遍的现象)

2.      work  overtime (加班)

3.      pressure  from managers and project deadlines (来自老板和项目截止日期的压力)

4.      competitive  market (竞争的市场)

5.      working-hour  limits (工作时长限制)

6.      the  internet run the risk of blurring the lines between work and personal life (网络模糊了工作和个人生活的界限)

问题

1.      health  problems/issues (健康问题)

2.      increase  the level of burnout (过度劳累)

3.      affect  co-worker relatioships (影响同事间的关系)

4.      family  problems and damages human relationships (家庭问题并损害人际关系)

5.      dispute  between husband and wife (夫妻间的争吵)

6.      spend  time with family members (与家人相处的时间)

7.      weaken  family bonds (削弱家庭纽带关系)

第二种版本

重要性

1.       extremely  important (格外重要)

2.       significant  to avoid work-life conflict (对于避免工作生活的冲突有重要意义)

3.       the significance of ‘work life’ balance (工作生活的重要性)

原因

既可以从正面解释,

也可以从负面影响解释(可参考第一种版本的问题)

任选一种解释清楚即可

1.       fewer  mental/physical problems (更少的心里、身体健康问题)

2.       recharge  (充电)

3.       increase productivity (增加工作效率)

4.       increase work satisfaction (影响)

5.       achieve career longevity (达到长期工作效果)

6.       increase loyalty to employer (增加对雇主的忠诚度)

4.       maintain/achieve a balance between work roles and  family life (维持工作角色和家庭生活的平衡)

5.       ensure family/work commitments (保证家庭/工作责任)

第三种版本

人群

可以从几个方面来谈论什么样的人群难以维持平衡:

1.       行业:建议大家可以写自己的行业,懂得单词会较多

·          multiple  occupations (许多行业)

·          Professional  (工作人员)

·          Legal/educational/medical  practitioner (律师、老师、医生)

2.       年龄:

·          Middle-aged  population (中年人)

·          Late 20s/early 30s (25岁以上/35岁以下)

3.       国家/地区:

·          Developing/developed countries (发展中,发达国家)

·          Countries that export labours (劳动力输出国家)

 

除了以上给大家的单词和短语建议以外,鼓励大家可以从google上面搜索自己喜欢的论点和关键词,这样记得也比较牢固。

 

那么有了结构模版和论点,我们就可以写出来文章了,下面给大家一篇例文(第一种版本):The time people devote in jobleaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? Whatproblem will this shortage of time cause?


例文:

Maintaining a satisfactory work-life balance is more difficult than ever as people are devoted to jobs and leaves little time for personal life (重述题目). The work aholic phenomenon becomes common among working populations in every corner of the world (普及率). However, the unbalanced work-life lifestyle is not healthy, and it can lead to many social and personal issues (带来的问题).

 

It is not difficult to find that this overtime culture is wide spread across many countries, especially in developing countries like China(给出普及率). This is possibly because pressure from managers or project deadlines pushes people to work extra hours (解释原因. According to a recent study by Beijing University, 90% of the early 30s working in Beijing reported that they worked overtime every week and had little time to enjoy personal life (举例子).

 

One of the issues that people spend too much time on work results in mental illness (带来的问题). To be more specific, working with little rest increases the level of burn out and therefore brings mental health problems (具体解释). For example, my uncle is adepartment manager of a global company in Shanghai and he often works overtime. Last month, he was diagnosed with anxiety order due to the overwhelming stress from his workplace. (举例子)


In summary, devoting time to work without spending time on personal life is a widespread problem especially in developing countries due to competitive market, and this phenomenon damages people’s mental health. (总结一遍全文内容) In this regard, governments and companies should raise their awareness to address this issue. (呼吁政府公司)



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