购物中心是否应该取代小商店?高频ESSAY思路详解

原创 2019年02月06日 7PLUS英语


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高频ESSAY讲解


首先,大家需要知道的是,PTE的写作部分作答时间为20分钟,在这段时间内,大家需要好好审题,理清思路,并想好适当的观点及例子来支持自己的观点。如果我们能把大部分高频题目都理一遍思路并想好适当的表达。我们考试的时候遇见原题或类似的题目时便会游刃有余。


以下是这篇写作的题目:


Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion onthis? Do you think this is a good or bad change


遇到这道题,我们需要首先分析题目问得是什么


往往一些同学因为没有好好审题便直接开始写作,可能会导致所问非所答,文章逻辑不清。对于这类同学,一定要提高审题能力,如果需要可以将题目翻译为中文,方便理解。


这道题的翻译如下:


大型购物商场正在取代小商铺,你对此的观点是什么?你认为这是一个好的还是坏的改变。


首先大家一定要认识到,这个题一共有两问。但两问其实问的是相同的问题,就是你对此的态度。


因此,这道题大家可以选择支持任意一方,写成一边倒的形式,也可以两个body段,一段讲有点,一段讲缺点,在结尾段再进行让步,说出自己的观点。


进入主题段,下面是给大家提供一些写作思路。


Good

  • provide convenience for people, because people can  achieve one-stop shopping, meaning that they can get whatever they want in  one place

  • prices of goods are more competitive, because there are  always some shopping events and provide more discount for consumers

  • People can not only have a great shopping experience,  but also enjoy great food and spend valuable time with families and friends  in cinema located in big shopping malls

  • The quality of products can be guaranteed.

Bad

  • Always locate in city center, so it is not possible for  people who live in suburbs to buy daily necessities.

  • The cost of building large shopping mall leads to the  financial burden to local government.


结合上面的思路,我们选取几条观点,配合7PLUS的模板,成文即可。

下面我们给出一篇这个题目的范文:


Mall has become a big business. In the central of metropolis, there are wide spread shopping malls providing daily necessities. In weekends and public holidays, millions ofpeople are crowded into the malls. Because of the proliferation of big shoppingmalls, some people hold the opinion that small stores are no longer needed and should be totally replaced by large shopping malls. From my point of view,while shopping malls provide convenience for people in big cities, small stores are still essential in rural areas.

 

Admittedly, shopping malls, a collection of retail stores and restaurants, provide endless convenience for normal people. For example, big shopping centers, like Chadstone shopping center, as they have evolved into multi-stored structure housing a large number of stores that sell diverse products and service, people can achieve one-stop purchase, which extremely save their time. Moreover,compared with small stores, it is more possible for individuals to purchase cheaper products in shopping malls. Because shop owners often have high demands of products, it is easier for them to enjoy reasonable prices from suppliers.

 

However, things are quite different in rural areas where small shops still play a predominant role. For instance, in a remote areas with limited demands for goods, it is no doubt that building a shopping mall is actually a waste money. In this circumstance, small stores, which can satisfy local residence’s daily necessities,may be a better choice.

 

In conclusion,large shopping malls do offer efficiency and financial benefits to people in big cities, but in small towns, small stores selling daily necessities are really crucial.


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