各位学霸们好,今天黄老师来分享一下本周PTE考场出现的写作Summarize Written Text(SWT)的真题和解析(来源于:《雅培PTE满分答案-12月版》)。
首先,在我们看真题之前,黄老师想纠正一个常见的错误概念:SWT可以无脑套模版,网上流传的无脑模版有:
- 低端的:and / 分号(;)无脑连接文章句子
- 高端的:while / and 无脑连接文章的句子
这两个模版的前提都是:SWT可以忽略文章的逻辑,但是这其实是错误的,SWT需要满足两个条件:
1. 语法需要正确
2. 语法需要反应文章逻辑关系
比如,上文机经中有两句话,中文是这样的:
1. 双盲实验在临床试验中非常好用
2. 认为双盲实验是更加优异的是有问题的
那么,这两句话之间的关系显然为‘转折’关系,所以如果这时候用‘and’并列结构连接的话,我们能够满足上面的条件1,也就是语法正确。但是并不能满足条件2 -逻辑关系正确。所以这个时候依旧会失分。
所以,这道题正确的解题方式应该为:根据文章的逻辑选择对应的语法结构。
而且,文章的句子很多时候本身即为复杂句,所以这个时候如果无脑使用while或者and的话容易造成语法叠加的错误。
比如:文章原句A because B (A,B为句子) + 文章原句 C if D,合并,那么如果我们用while,就变成了 A because B while C if D. 那么同学们可以发现这句话的逻辑关系相当的混乱,所以也不满足我们的条件2。
这意味着,在很多时候我们需要对于文章的信息进行删减甚至改写,而这就需要同学们有一个比较夯实的语法基础了。
所以,SWT绝对不是把模版背一下就可以轻松满分的题目,同学们还需要掌握复杂句合并原则(不难,但是需要练习)。否则的话,在同样碰到原题的情况下,语法基础好的学生就能考过,而本身语法比较薄弱的学生依旧可能会失分。
SWT# 43 Tree Rings
Here’s how tree ring dating, known to scientists as dendrochronology, works. If you cut a tree down today, it’s straightforward to count the rings inwards, starting from the tree’s outside. Hence the sequence of the rings in a tree cross-section is like a message in Morse code formerly used for sending telegraph messages; dot-dot-dash-dot-dash in the Morse code, wide-wide-narrow-wide-narrow in the tree ring sequence.
Actually, the tree ring sequence is even more diagnostic and richer in information than the Morse code, because trees actually contain rings spanning much different width, rather than the Morse code choice between dot and dash.
Tree ring specialists (known as dendrochronologists) proceed by noting the sequence of wider and narrower rings in a tree cut down in a known recent year, and also noting the sequences in beams from trees cut down at various times in the past. In that way, dendrochronologists have constructed tree ring records extending back for thousands of years in some parts of the world. A bonus of dendrochronology is that the width and substructure of each ring reflect the amount of rain and the season at which the rain fell during that particular year. Thus, tree ring studies also allow one to reconstruct the past climate.
参考答案:(这道题信息比较细碎,同学们请注意合并文章的句子)
Tree ring dating is known to scientists as dendrochronology while the sequence of the rings in a tree cross-section is like a message in Morse code, and dendrochronologists have constructed tree ring records containing the sequence of wider and narrower rings in beams to reconstruct the past climate because such records reflect the amount of rain and the season at which the rain fell during that particular year.
秒懂逻辑:年轮的学习被称为树木年代学,年轮的信息就像摩斯密码一样。年轮学家可以通过年轮的宽展顺序去获得过去气候的信息,因为这些信息反应了当年的降雨量和季节。
SWT# 47 Double Blind
The feature of being “double blind”, where neither patients nor physicians are aware of who receives the experimental treatment, is almost universally trumpeted as being a virtue of clinical trials. Hence, trials that fail to remain successfully double blind are regarded as providing inferior evidential support. The rationale for this view is unobjectionable: double blinding rules out the potential confounding influences of patient and physician beliefs. Nonetheless, viewing double blind trial as necessarily superior is problematic. For one, it leads to the paradox that very effective experimental treatments will not be supportable by best evidence. If a new drug were to make even the most severe symptoms of the common cold disappear within seconds, most participants and investigators would correctly identify it as the latest wonder drug and not the control (i.e. placebo) treatment. Any trial testing the effectiveness of this wonder drug will therefore fail to remain double blind. Similar problems arise for treatments, such as exercise and most surgical techniques, whose nature makes them resistant to being tested in double blind conditions. It seems strange that an account of evidence should make priori judgments that certain claims can never be supported by ‘best evidence’. It would be different if the claims at issue were pseudoscientific – untestable. But so far as treatments with large effects go, the claim that they are effective is highly testable and intuitively should receive greater support from the evidence than do claims about treatments with moderate effects.
参考答案:
Double blind where neither patients nor physicians are aware of who receives the experimental treatment is almost universally trumpeted as being a virtue of clinical trials because double blinding rules out the potential confounding influences of patient and physician beliefs, but viewing double blind trial as necessarily superior is problematic because it leads to the paradox that very effective experimental treatments will not be supportable by best evidence, which should receive great support.
秒懂逻辑:该文章逻辑较为烦碎且信息量巨大,同学们一定要熟记。
双盲试验被广泛运用,因为它排除了病人和医生的主观因素,但是认为双盲试验更好是不对的,因为它会导致试验不能被其证据所证实悖论,而证据是应该收到更大的支持的。
SWT# 49 Khoikhoi
In around 2300 BP (Before Present), hunter gatherers called the San acquired domestic stock in what is now modern-day Botswana. Their population grew and spread throughout the Western half of South Africa. They were the first pastoralists in southern Africa, and called themselves Khoikhoi (or Khoe), which means 'men of men' or 'the real people'. This name was chosen to show pride in their past and culture. The Khoikhoi brought a new way of life to South Africa and to the San, who were hunter gatherers as opposed to herders. This led to misunderstandings and subsequent conflict between the two groups. The Khoikhoi were the first native people to come into contact with the Dutch settlers in the mid-17th century. As the Dutch took over land for farms, the Khoikhoi were dispossessed, exterminated, or enslaved and therefore their numbers dwindled. The Khoikhoi were called the ‘Hottentots’ by European settlers because the sound of their language was so different from any European language, and they could not pronounce many of the words and sounds.
参考答案:
Hunter gatherers called the San were the first pastoralists in southern Africa and called themselves Khoikhoi while the Khoikhoi brought a new way of life to the San and led to conflict between the two groups, and the Khoikhoi were the first native people to come into contact with the Dutch settlers whereas the Dutch, who called the Khoikhoi ‘Hottentots’, dwindled number of the Khoikhoi by dispossessing, exterminating, or enslaving.
秒懂逻辑:Khoikhoi人是非洲第一批牧民并且给非洲带来了冲突,他们也是第一批接触到荷兰人的人,但是荷兰人把他们几乎灭绝了,并且称他们为Hottentots。
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