【7分雅思】雅思写作流程图考官范文深度解析

2014年09月02日 澳大利亚留学生



江湖传说流程图就是洪水猛兽,有些同学看到流程图就自动放弃放弃考试,准备下次备考了。流程图真的有那么可怕吗?7分雅思为你深度解析流程图五大特点,实例解释如何写出高分流程图答案!流程图不可怕,掌握方法就可以!


考官范文及深度点评

The figure illustrates the process used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the weather. 【第一段改写,要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词:process:整个过程, stage:阶段,step:步骤】


There are four stages in the process, beginning with the collection of information about the weather. This information is then analysed, prepared for presentation, and finally broadcast to the public.【第二段总括四个阶段,运用多样的句式,显示语言功底, 不呆板。注意beginning with,then,finally等表示顺序的连接词。】

Looking at the first and second stages of the process, there are three ways of collecting weather data and three ways of analysing it. Firstly, incoming information can be received by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo. The same data can also be passed to a radar station and presented on a radar. Finally, drifting buoys also receive data which can be shown on a synoptic chart. 【大量使用被动语态,显示客观性。注意使用same,also等词不漏痕迹的过渡。使用定语从句将两个句子链接起来】

At the third stage of the process, the weather broadcast is prepared on computers. Finally, it is delivered to the public on television, on the radio, or as a recorded telephone announcement.

【第二段已经是总括段,不需要写总结。】


流程图特点总结

一:介绍过程要使用一般现在时

二:大量使用定语从句,将有关联的两句话连接。

三:大量使用被动语态

四:使用一些表示顺序的连接词

五:一般不需要写总结

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