2022年4月9雅思大作文真题范文:高频食物类!

2022年04月13日 IPENGLISH黄老师


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各位学霸们好,欢迎来到雅培英语每周雅思大作文真题范文。今天黄老师跟大家来分享下上周六(2022年4月9日)雅思大作文真题,上周考题如下:


2022.4.9真题

In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of food from all over the world. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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题目思路


首先,在我们看范文之前,黄老师想提醒同学们注意几点:


1.该题及其容易写成废话逻辑(tautology),同学们请千万注意不要写套话(具体讲解戳黄老师上期推文《西游记式回答》),比如:

❌ 国际食物能够让人们品尝到来自于不同国家的食物(等同于‘国际食物让人们品尝到国际食物‘)。

✅ 国际食物能够让人们足不出户就领略到食物所代表的异域文化(异域:exotic)


2.该题问题为outweigh类型,对于该类型的题目同学们可以一律采取2+3的写作格式,即:


优点1 + 优点2 + 缺点1 + 缺点2 + 缺点3 = 缺点大于优点(反之亦然)


同样的,黄老师在之前的《考官带你分析雅思大作文》系列讲过该结构,这是剑桥官方网站推荐的此类题目结构!


3.食物类话题往往和文化挂钩,同学们如果想得到一个高分就需要积累相关词汇,比如‘文化孕育了食物‘,’地道的当地美食‘等。这些词究竟如何能够地道地表达,同学们请跟着黄老师一起来看这篇文章的范文段落吧!(时间原因,黄老师仅列出缺点段,优点段可参考去年4.19日同期文章,收录于《雅培英语雅思满分范文合辑》,需要的请找黄老师领取哦)


* 范文词句来自于英文杂志期刊,由黄老师抄录创作,转载请注明出处!


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满分词汇&满分段落

2022.4.9真题


In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of food from all over the world. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?


满分词汇:


adversely adv. 负面地

regional cuisines 当地美食

incubate v. 孕育

depreciate v. 贬值

authentic adj. 真正的/地道的

populate with v. 充斥着

gustatory adj. 味觉的


缺点段1:


International food has adversely affected traditional regional cuisines. These cuisines grow and develop in homes, and traditional meals and preferences for specific dishes come from exposure on a day-to-day, week-to-week basis whereas our modern, multicultural environment that has incubated the global prevalence of certain food from dominant cultures can both help us appreciate other cuisines while at the same time depreciate our connection to our personal heritage with food.


缺点段2:


Also, when visiting an unfamiliar region or foreign land, it is impossible for travelers to seek out a true cultural experience including authentic sampling of its cuisine if the area is populated with international food chains. These restaurants are impossible to provide tourists and travelers with a cultural gustatory experience which can only be found in more upscale traditional offerings that fuse regional dishes with cooking techniques.




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