流程图9分【考官】范文+无忧雅思【内部资料】流程图攻略

2014年10月23日 无忧小雅哥



「流程图要素」勤读题不要慌,起始于Overview,描述清晰,使用连词,句式尽量多变,祝烤鸭童鞋们轻松掌握流程图。



流程图范文 难度 ★

The Flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled (第一句一定要交待出整个图内容,让考官一眼就明白你读懂题了,The flow chart shows how… 可以作为一个万能的流程图开头套句).

It is clear that (和写别的A类小作文一样,流程图也需要overview,It is clear that…是一个很不错的句式童鞋们可以大胆使用) there are six distinct stages in this process(图标一共有几个流程也一定需要再第一段内表明), from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper(然后烤鸭们把第一个以及最后一个流程写进去就好啦,这样,一个完美的流程图题introduction就写完啦).

At the first stage(body段需要从第一个stage写到最后一个stage哦,但是切记,千万不要简单的重复,要不然就成流水账了)in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then(悄悄的进入下一个阶段了)sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, (又进入一个新阶段了哦)the graded paper is transported to a paper mill.

Stages four and five (很巧妙的将两个阶段统一描述,高效,简洁) of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this (很不错的一个连接词), all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally,(进入最后一个阶段)the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product: usable paper.

(159 words, Band 9)


无忧小雅哥 comments:

-见到流程图不要慌,读懂题很重要;

-Introduction部分一定要有overview,并且将整个循环描述清楚;

-流程图的每一个阶段都需要描述清晰,连接词很关键,句式一定要多变哦!~


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