PTE大作文每月必考题 - 大超市代替小商店满分答案与思路,IPENGLISH黄老师微信公众号文章

同学们好，今天黄老师来给同学们分享一篇几乎每个月都会考到的PTE大作文：

Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Do you think this is a positive or negative development？

这道题看似简单，但是其实暗藏玄机，常见的论点比如：

- 大超市可以让消费者买到各种各样的商品

其实并不准确，因为没有把大超市和小商店进行对比。同学们不妨这样想一想：小超市也可以买到各种各样的商品，难道不是吗？

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所以，同学们在写的时候务必要分析大商场和小超市独有的好处，然后再进行对比：

比如大超市可以提供一站式消费，而这是小商店无法提供的。

这样才是一个逻辑（written discourse）满分的论点

带着这样的思路，同学们可以记住黄老师提供的雅培独家满分原文：

* 切忌不要死记硬背，在记住思路的情况下背诵好词（蓝色词），再套入模版即可

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论点1

论点1：The prevalence of large retail centers is driving small local shops out of business to a great extent.

展开1：In recent years, it seems to be increasingly impractical for small family-owned shops to survive in an environment where large shopping complex, with its unique advantage of being versatile, has become customers’ preference.

论点2：Large shopping centres offer every convenience for its retailers and customers.

展开2：Compared with small shops, which normally offer specific range of merchandises. large ones provide a sheer volume of goods and services, ranging from high-end luxurious products to everyday groceries, which provides a one-stop service for consumers with various needs and additional advantage for retailers with abundant clienteles.

秒懂逻辑：小商店难以生存 + 为店家和顾客提供稳定便利【正反各一边】

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