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【2014年4月5日A类大作文】
An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their live. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
People have been changing careers and moving homes more frequently nowadays. Although living such a fast-paced lifestyledoes improve career prospectsfor individuals, as well as broadening their views onlife, if these individuals are parents, we cannot ignore the negative effects of such instabilityon children.
(题目是问positive or negative，这篇文章的主旨是折中的写法。Introduction=paraphrase + idea summary)
Changing careers and homes aids ingaining a diverse range ofwork experience. Through learning different skills at various jobs, we are better prepared foradaptation to new environments, a skill that is highly valued inemployers.
Moving homes also helps to broaden our horizons. By frequently moving we have a better opportunity to experience various living arrangementsand interact withvarious people in different neighbourhoods. This promotes empathy through exposing ourselves tomany differing ways of life that all help us to better understand the world around us.
(这两段的主旨是“换工作”和“搬家”的一些优点。分开两段写两个观点，清晰明了。)
However, such practice could negativelyimpact the social development of children if their parents wereconstantlychanging jobs and homes. A stable home environment is vital to a child’s development and without a proper opportunity to makelasting social bondswith other children because of a constant need to move homes; they could be hindered intheir development of social skills.
(由于是折中的写法，所以在写完了优点之后，也要相应的写出缺点。)
Frequently changing our place of residenceand our jobs can positively impact our lives through not onlybroadening our horizons and allowing us a diverse range of work experience; however, we must also be aware ofthe people around us, and the possible side effects on people thatrely onus.
【2014年4月5日G类大作文】
Some people claim that competitive sports could bring different ages and culture together, such as football. Others believe competitive sports cause some problems to groups and nationalities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Competitive sports have widelybeen held to be a uniting force betweenpeople, as seenthrough such sporting events such as the Olympics, which bring togethermany different people by fostering a sense of togetherness under one common interest. However, we must also beaware and cautious ofthe competitive nature of such events and the possibility of theescalation of conflictbecause of differences between various groups in such a heated environment.
（题目的要求是discuss both views and give your opinion，所以两个观点在文中都要讨论。Introduction部分在概括了两边的观点之后，也给出了作者自己的看法，简洁又明了的开头。）
As a way to bring people together, sporting events unite peopleunder a common love of competitive sports which help to ease differencesbetween various age and culture groups to promote empathyand compassion.By establishing a common ground, sporting events help different people realise how similar they are to each otherwithin the sporting environment, especially when supporting the same team, which can have positive effects outside the sports arena.
However, given the heated nature of competitive sports, if not properly managed, competition could escalate problems and conflict between different groups and nationalities. If individuals were to feelunhappy or outragedby the sportsmanship within the sporting field, they may display this displeasureat the offending team’ssupporters. This anger can then possibly fuel other prejudices or biasesthey may have about a separate age or culture group which onlyfurther widens the gapbetween groups.
（不得不说，这部分的词句真真是很漂亮的。没有用到很多很高深的词汇和语法，但却写得非常的流利顺畅，这才是词句部分得高分的必备—topic vocab）
Although competitive sporting can bring together people of various backgroundswe must be cautious of conflicts that can have the opposite effect and possibly create disunitybetween various groups.
（conclusion和introduction首尾呼应，再次点题和表明自己的观点。让考官一目了然）
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