2022年1月15日雅思大作文真题【科技/社交媒体】范文（必考类型！）,IPENGLISH黄老师微信公众号文章

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各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家来分享一下上周六（2022.1.15）雅思大作文真题范文，这次因为比较忙范文写的较慢，请大家见谅。

在我们分析题目之前，黄老师想重新提一下：所有范文中好词好句均由黄老师从专业英文期刊杂志中整理而出！！绝非中式英语或模板词句！！强烈推荐同学们理解性记忆，并且在对应话题中练习。

上周题目如下：（该题有两个版本，一个范文较大，一个较小）

题目及解析

版本1：

New technologies have changed the way people spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

版本2：

Many people use social media to keep in touch with each other every day. Do think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

对于优缺点比较类题目，黄老师在之前的《剑桥雅思考官解读雅思范文》系列中提到了官方认可的写作格式：（强烈推荐还没看的同学戳黄老师头像查看）

1.缺点1 + 缺点2 + 优点1 + 优点2 + 优点3 = 优点>缺点（或者反过来）

2.缺点1 + 缺点2 + 优点1 + 优点2 + 比较句(段) = 优点><缺点

这两种写法各有各的好处：

1.写法1逻辑较为简单，但是需要同学们想出5个不同的论点，对于大家的话题储备能力要求较高。

2.写法2只需写4个论点，但是需要同学们关联优缺点进行比较，对于大家的逻辑辩论能力要求较高。

同学们在考场上可以根据话题的熟悉程度自行选择使用哪种方法。（同学们请注意：除了上述两种方法外，其他任何方法都不能保证100%正确！！！）

那么，带着上面的思路，我们来看今天范文吧：

满分词汇及满分段落

2022.1.15真题

版本1：

New technologies have changed the way people spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

版本2：

Many people use social media to keep in touch with each other every day. Do think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

满分词汇：

introvert n. 内向（的人）

socially reclusive users n. 被社会排挤的用户

virtual interaction n. 虚拟沟通

fall prey to v. 成为…的猎物（受害者）

alienation n. 疏远

withdrawal from society n. 脱离社会

acquaintances n. 熟人（朋友未满）

professionals n. 职业人士

collaborate v. 合作

缺点段：

It is true that a number of introverts and socially reclusive users place too much emphasis on virtual interaction, and ignore the real world outside. Also, school children, young girls, and women can fall prey to online attacks such as cyber bullying, or online harassment, which can create tension and distress.

优点段1：

However, although intense use of social media increases the risk of isolation, alienation, and withdrawal from society, it can actually increase sociability, civic engagement, and the intensity of family and friend relationships, in all cultures if used properly. We would still be sitting by a candle and writing a letter to get in touch with a friend, as opposite to sitting in front of the computer and logging into social medias to contact a friend or family member on the other side of the world if it was not for certain inventions that were so incredible that they had enough impact to change the whole world forever.

优点段2：

In addition, social networks offer the opportunity for people to re-connect with their old friends and acquaintances, make new friends, share content and pictures, and many other activities. For instance, professionals use social media sties like LinkedIn to enhance their career and business prospects while students can collaborate with their peers to improve their academic proficiency and communication skills.